Interesting delay you used on the lead synth to start off the song, when the second patch came in it almost sounded rushed as a result. The bass kick was really muffled, its alright for it to be that low, there was like a reverb on it or something, maybe adjust the freq. The electronic drums at the end left something more to be desired. The snare should come in on the down beat, not the up beat, it will mkae the song sound more full.]
Not bad work though, keep it up
NOW THIS IS A REVIEW!!!! Thanks for the tips I'll work on a better version while keeping your review in mind :)
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