So this was an interesting track
I liked this, it was abitmore then a loop it had some style and depth to it, has a good techno feel to it, kinda something i might hear at a rave or something, and the quality you kept up pretty good i thought, the rythem keeps going and while there is not much of a build up it still keeps one interested to keep listening so on that note its pretty impressive as for improving stuff, onlything i can really say is maybe a more deeper build up from start to finish, but other then that this was pretty impressive.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned above the only real issue would be more of a build up, everything else seemed pretty good.