This Peice sounds Unclear
In the this peice that you made their is nothing really for a listener to grab on. It feels more like background music for a dark scene. if it is to be one of those kinds of horror scenes your trying to portray i suggest adding possible some sound effects too the peice to spice it up, what you have now does give a feeling of tension it just gets old after a while, again theres no spice. Also balance in bringing out that robot voices, right know since it is not clear itjust muddies up the piece. In short is is definate that this peice in my opinion needs a little more work but i think you can make it happen.
Quite hard to hear...
It's quite hard to hear, but from what I could tell it was well done. If you use a mic, try to get a better recording
ya i use a mic ill try 2 get a better reording sometime but im busy workin on a new rock song so i dont know if ill have time