The ONLY thing it needed was a little switching up; By the 4th time the riff cycled through, a new sound or switch up from the tempo or existing sound should've been inserted....Don't get me wrong, it sounds COOL AS FUCK! Very industrial, I can easily base this off a fight of some sort...it just needs to hop-about from the initial loop...in the self-titled flash you made it was far too short, so I HAD to check out the Audio file, to find it's actually too long, considering the content.
The scream you had in there? Wasn't girly at all...but appropriate for it...in fact, I thought it actually sounded pretty cool. FUCK what other people think, you need to like yourself!
All-in-all, badass loop! It just needs variety to spice it up! This is the first audio submission I've heard from you, so now I'm going to check out the rest of your stuff.
For a loop it was pretty awesome. Very weird and distorted. To bad you didn't make it longer.
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