Maybe if the drums wobbled, it would be good. Try and get that in there instead of the alternation, because the change is a little abrupt and sudden. Otherwise, amazing job. 9/10, 4/5
yep, orchestration is good, some strong melodic ideas aswell. not too sure about the alternately panned drums, i'd stick em mono and beef em up a bit to give it a bit more oomph.
I liked the whole composition. In your other songs you'd always add something around 4 counts after the beginning, and again 4 counts... and so on...
The guitar was awesome, I'm definitely seeing (actually hearing) some improvement.
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Hey J, Kaburorne pretty much said everything I might add to this. The organ does need some love, but I can see that you did do more melody playing than the version you showed me before. I like the strings, but instead of having them follow a basic chord progression with the rest of the song, try some variation and counter-melody. Also, a call-and-response section between the organ and piano would have been delicious. As far as the drums go, panning is good, but don't pan the entire set! Pan snares partially to one side, and hats partially to another to give it a balanced feel. Bouncing back and forth gets on the ears' nerves really quick and detracts for the song. Panning is best used to split instrumentation between channels to give the entire track a "full" feeling, like the soundscape is full of music, where all the pieces come together to make a complete sound. I'm sure you've listened to a song where you feel like something is missing if you don't have both earpieces in. That's what I'm talking about.
So, yes. Definitely chill, as always. Keep'em coming. Glad one of us can keep cranking these things out. ;)
Awesome song man. Love the organ, just fits perfectly! I give it a 5/5 or 9/10. Keep the good songs a-coming!
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