not a bad track....
I just didn't care for the slight vocals for an intro and an outro, maybe just my taste but I felt it took away from the song. You've got a good overall sound, so keep it up man. The only reason I didnt ten was I feel vox in some techno/trance songs are used a crutch sometimes, not that you necessarily did that here. I'd just try and refine your intros a bit and how to end some of your tracks. Because it seemed a little bland. I'd still love to hear more of you work though, so keep it coming.