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the start is a little bit like Linkin Park...
Author Comments
alright heres the final version. the best i could do without knowing how to write proper buildups, some spots may seem like they transition wierd. thats why. but all and all. its supposed to be a dark little tune till the end when you break through and see the light<---------- clever eh?
so tell me your thoughts and what I can do to improve it
Great!!
Loved it can see the darkness in it and can see the light at the end did a Great Job
Like being in a maze trying to escape from the darkness Till you see the light that makes you get hope
lol i dont say that alot
and i have to Agree with DanRaniera try adding some exter tunes in if you got time or nothing to do
Much Better!
That was so much better... but try adding some few more tunes in, background nise, or secondary main tune... so it could be more effective... Anyways, i like what you did here... was kinda repeatitve though, but okay... aking a full track out of an intro is kind of hard... I love the piano effects in this one. I like the part from 1:24 to teh end, that was my fave part, where i can hear great piano effects andthat something birdy noise bubbling noise or whatever you call it... There is nothing wrong with this one, but just maybe, as i said above, try to add more tunes in or a secondary main tune to make it much more effective! Seriously great job on this... You have great talent and potential! Keep up the great work and i am looking forward to hearing more music that will come out from you soon! Maybe someday a collab? KEEP IT UP!
Cheers,
Daneil Karter
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- Dec 17, 2007
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- 2 min 40 sec
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