it could be better, but its by no means bad, awfully repetitive though, adding some layers and an actually varying beat into there and you have a pretty good song
so how long could you honestly listen to this before you shot yourself.
Um... Concept.... I guess yeah good
Concept.. I can grasp... Composition... Unfortunately... ... well teh score says it all 3 is being nice
Well... to be nice that wasn't too bad. You drum is way off, if it was sync'd (synchronized) it wouldn't be as bad. Keep at it, and soon you'll have some awesome songs. :)
:O :O :O
Do you have ears?