Nice drum beat

This was pretty cool and I like the drum beat you have going on this the Vocals are pretty good too, However I do think you should have more focus on the "DRUMS" they were light but would love more deeper ones to accent the vocals even more, but just an ideas here.

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would love more deeper drums to accent the vocals even more, but just an ideas here.

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Kewl

The inro to this song is wierd, i like the guitar though, its got a cool ring to it. And it fits well with the tune. The vocals come in pretty early and theyre pretty good. The slow and simple quiet drumbeat behind it is alright too.
The lyrics are kewl too. :)
Anyway its a good song but maybe have the vocals a tad louder as theyre pretty quiet.
Hope to see more!

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I like the singing

This is a good poliical song although i found, that the tune does tend to be louder then the actual singing. Which made it hard to understand the singer lyrics
I found the lyics powerful especially with the system, is corrurpt. I liked the beat and way the tune sounded. It is a fairly long song but it was very enjoyable ,and good well done

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Pretty Neat

The intro to this sounds pretty good to me though the vocals seem a little too quiet, it would be good if those where a little louder in my view, they are too hidden by the background music in my view, so they aren't really very clear. But the actual music itself is very good though maybe could have been played better to fit the theme a little better, didn't think the tune worked with the theme.

It's not too bad, there is room for improvment here, but other than the few things I've mentioned, everything else sounds to come together very well and the length is also very good, so nice work overall with this.

4/5

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Interesting...

You said in a previous response that it was Alternative Rock. Isn't there a section for that, rather than in Indie, as most Indie that I've listened to has lyrics that you can understand. Anyway, aside from that, I can understand them well enough, so I don't know what the issue was there.

Anyway, this is a decent song, sending a message across about the futility of the world in general. That's how life is, I'm afraid. Let's move on and talk about the tune itself - it's a quite simple riff on the keyboard, which keeps looping throguh the song, with a basic sounding guitar backing. I think that it's got a little samey through the tune, as you don't even give us an instrumental, which is a great chance to take the instruments away from the vocals and show us what they are capable of.

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