your voice is ok but idgaf if you call me a homophobe whatsoever lmfao
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"2007... Wow, so different. Different time."
*EDIT 2023*
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SOng I wrote for another girl
Started out as a love song
THen she broke mah heart!!!!
It then turned into a bitter song
Lyrics......
It's Ok
Im feelin real strange
Brains gone blurted and deranged
(people can't ya listen to me whinge)
Can't ask god
Can ask satan
Gotta get rid of this love and hatred
(people's can't ya see.....)
You hate homo's
You hate gays's
Well you'll hate me when I say
Your a Homophobe
Ears are bleeding
Truth is singing
Well you'll hate me when I say
Your a Homophobe.......Yeah?
Where do I begin?
My whole life's a big sin
All because I can't win
(God ya like to listen to me whinge)
You're royal disiples
You're royal followers
Are now low down sin dwollerwers
(People can't ya see...)
You hate homo's
You hate gays's
Well you'll hate me when I say
Your a Homophobe
Ears are bleeding
Truth is singing
Well you'll hate me when I say
Your a Homophobe.......Yeah?
*guitar solo*
Hate me
God you hate me...? X god knows how much
You hate homo's
You hate gays's
Well you'll hate me when I say
Your a Homophobe
Ears are bleeding
Truth is singing
Well you'll hate me when I say
Your a Homophobe
Homophobe
Homophobe
Homophobe
Your a Homophobe............
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This is the rough copy peoples, thought I'd let ya know that a better version will come out one day.
If I get off my butt and do it :P
Peace and enjoy
-Cherry
your voice is ok but idgaf if you call me a homophobe whatsoever lmfao
Twas a different time.
hi, can i use this song for a video of speedpaint? it such a good song i love it, also i thinking for use it for my intro in the videos,can i?
If I record a better version maybe.
Only recently have I rejoined the land of the PC world. Like over 10 Years later ha
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You have a really unique voice, i like it!
it's pretty good seeing as it's a demo, keep working on it.
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Overall a good song, with cool lyrics and all.
But the things that need working on until the finsihed working are;
The singing. First of all, you're not to good of a singer, no offence. But it's nothing that a little practice won't fix, you should be abit more aggressive, but still focus alot on singing good, not loud.
The solo. It just doesn't shine through enough (or at least not on my speakers). If I were you I'd add just a touch of more distortion in the solo, experiment around alittle until you find something you like. Or not, after all it's your song :P
Anyways that's all I can think of right now (got distracted by South Park) so it's a 8/10 and 4/5.
Cool!!
I find that the lyrics and the music are nice (especially the lyrics ^^), and the voice is good!
Continue, please!!!
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