Ok, not very long, just a demo, I need to know what you guys think, whether you think it should be a better synth, or if there needs to be changes made to the chorus, levels, etc. Just so I can get a general idea of where this piece of music needs to go before it becomes likeable.
Thanks, and enjoy =)
I like the synth a lot
The build is too long and way to quite, like stated below. I like the synth chord progression, but can't decide if I like the Bassline. Overall its a good start and I think when its all said and done it will be a good piece! What do you use?
Finally, something under 140 BPM
A nice break from all those happycore junkies.
I like your synth lead and the rhythm alot, but your chord progression just doesn't make sense...
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Here's an idea...
Make the beginning louder and the ending quieter than they currently are. I can't hear the beginning at all, and it gets too loud at the end.
Yeah, this is for very loud speakers, and the point of it is to create a buildup, in the real song, this is going to be the mid-part. Basically it will've just been crashing cymbals, it's gonna suddenly go quiet, and then build itself up. It'll sound better when I actually get it all perfect.
hmmmmmmm
very similar to paragonX9
Thanks alot :D
That rocks that I'm compared to arguably the best composer ever on Newgrounds.
Great demo!
I'm eager to get my hands in the full one \o/
Thankyou very much, I'm working my ass off to get it out asap :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Kelemanga 
