well...

There is both positive and negative aspects in here...I certainly like specific parts about this track.

The opening melody is nice- liking the synth. The synth over the top of it is alright by kinda drowns the opening melody and even the drums- and seems like the FX that are on top of it are used too randomly. the interlude that starts around 0:40 is very nice, very cool choir and piano sounds, and transitioning going back into the main melodical ideas. There is bassline in here that sounds worthwhile of showing off, but its too quiet, or you just need to lower the volume on the lead synth. Some synth strings in here would be cool as well.

conclusion was done fairly decently, I think you could have sustained the final note longer, and maybe formed a resolving chord with some of the choir pads that you used in the interlude.

unique drum loops, i would look into finding better samples tho-sounds too cheesy. I like the ranging volumes tho. the claps could be higher.

Keep at it, interesting track!