ok, so i think some things--the overall feel of the track was pretty nice, i liked how it sounds. but i think some tweakage can make this better.
-the lead synth sounded a little repetitive and just seemed to basic for my liking.
-the drums were well organized, but sounded a little too synthetic and weak. i say distort it a bit. also, don't use the cymbal rides quite so much ;)
-your bassline can be stronger/more emphasized/beefier imo.
-the overall arrangements of the notes at times seemed a little too random, but it generally set forth a good sound.
so, this track isnt perfect, but it sounds pretty good already. woo go you!!
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