Un affected by Poors-Pawn's desperate attempt to use everything he had in the end*Final Blow* Lejin laughs at the fragile attack and continues to add salt to RMP's wounds.
(Shout out to AaronR, AGANG love!)
It was okay.
It was a good song, and the lyrics flew together.
However, this song did get boring to me at times. I think that Hip-hop is meant to have different beats, otherwise it would be rap. Just hearing sentence after sentence got very redundant.
Try and mix up your beats, maybe if you have two songs under production try and mix them together in a way.
That's just a suggestion, because as it is right now it's still a good song, just not spectacular. Which it could be.
nice hip hop ! Very Skilled artist on lyrics
The song and the lyrics are superb,masterful, and the funniest lyrics for hip hop type music. Go to MTV channel and try getting Grammys on Hip Hop category Mr Invincible!
Thumbs up!
Boricuaground
Awesome
This is a good song. You have a creative mind and good lyrical ability. Thanks for using my song.
Anytime homie.
Yeah..
Beat has mad potential...
And you fucked that up.
..Good luck.
You wouldnt survive in a real battle.
Not on your level...
Bullshit.
I'd eat you, easily.
You're like 30, with kids and shit, and you are still elementary with your flow.
Stop talking on the track, attempting to sing and shit, and rap.
You can talk shit on paper, online, but on a track, it does nothing.
You told me to step off needle, but needle calls out RMP just like you.
I dont mind needle unless he starts shit on his own turf.
The song was alright, but nothing like it should have been.
It sounded alot like you just said alot of shit... and attempted a 10 line 2 rhyme scheme
You might be a veteran, but I'm looking at a veteran who's past his prime.
4'd... Just because I know you put effort into it.
=-Phade-=
New Era
lol a fan telling me about potential? lmfao your nothing compared to me... you gave it a four cause your a hater and this was too hot for your stupid retarded floppin ass LMFAO your a tortured joke kid and im a fucking god compared to you....lol potential?!?!? you dont even have any to begin with you rookie. XD
Mercy kill
Why u so kind to em dude? Kill em already. So damn tired of listening to their moaning. i say as a old legendary game master said: FINISH HIM!!!
And the song, ya, softish and cool. got goosebumps. Ur the man, keep em cumin'.
Ya the man, n***ah
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Lejin 
