I agree with the comet, but i think some kind of synthy strings would be very nice, maybe make major change in the song, sort of going to a chorus. Good job though
Please listen to one of my songs.
not bad for a first
Big thing here is to remaster it a bit, do some volume adjustments and try some compressors and soft clippers.
Drumline was pretty good, definately ragga style
Bass was pretty deep but just didn't seem vicious enough, maybe a synth playing with it in the midrange could help?
not bad though, I'd keep at it if I were you :)