Nice!

A good Pop Music here... I like the beggining with a bit of guitar... then... WHOOSH! Some E Guitar! I luv the beat and the guitar of course... I like the fading of the drums and guitars at som parts...

Here are the things that you need to work on:

- The end part, make sure the guitar is out!
- Get rid of that pshhh noise, sounds like it was recorded.

Anyways, Keep doing your stuff and looking forward to hear more from you!