Did i say that wrong?

constructive criticism - don't stop making beats.

Dayuumm

Good beat i like it.....

Im sicker then the kid writing before me ....>
My brain is more complex its writin rhymes for me....

Unlike most rappers i can rapp simple and not go over board....>
I wont even use the N word,All i do is use my verbs to harm you some more....

Easy like a pepsie can opening...>
I mentally destroy my enemy Oppressing his mind depressing his rhymes
Screwed like a pepsi cap he aint gonna be spitting lines....

I make the unreal turn into non-fiction...>
Make ya brain create images,Lock ya mind up in a cell of eternal Constriction....

yooo

im wit kuro hahaha damn dude i froze like whoe like i got slapd in da fave by tha devil him self yo this shit right heya n***a this shit right here is hot fire like whoe.

Keep it up, keep it real, never fuckin spill, da whole art u put on this table, makes me go unstable. its just the symitry of my minds mentality, ill let ne n***a fuckin battle me, but dont cross da line, u just might get sniped from behind, dnt get tha ballistics to come, my mindframe is so sadistic, if u try to go in my head ur ass will get twisted. like a joint, smoke it up n***a wuts da point, i get high like im on cloud nine. never comin down, all i wanna do is see da sunshine, pass da joint. pass da time, let u know im neva comin down from dat cloud. so spark ur blunts up wave it in da air, cmon nobody cares cmon neva gona see anotha n***a shed tears.
its da life of Hyperion brotha keep it real peace n love 1!

This freestyl was brought to u by: {Hyperion} Hahaaa VA baby

Gotdamn! lol

I froze the second this started playing. Why cant there be more music like this on the radio?

Nice!

Man, I'm a big fan of stuff like this. I thought yours was great, truly fucking nice.