Remake of Day 4 of Jamuary. Im very happy with this one. Also learned a new way to sing.

Any critiques are greatly appreciated.

countless heels strike the ground

their soles of flesh ressonate the sound.

perpetual motions tend to stay on beat

oh

you never lost the tempo

tendons crack in the cold

theres music in your soul

fumes are running low

my body is becoming slow

Im forgetting that tempo 

just recall that beat!

you never lost the tempo

The tempo in the soul