im sorry man

but it's off beat, off key. it just doesn't sound very quality at all.
What did you use to make it? i suggest FL studio, its very user friendly

This.......isn't........true.

It's domo yuri gotto ALL OVER AGAIN!!! The melody doesn't make sense the way the rhythm is presented.

omg

i'm sorry but... well... this was horrible. this made my ears bleed...extensively and thats bad. I've never heard something so boo boo before. Wow. Truly amazing, like you were in an alleyway, tipped over a garbage can and found this. Anyways I'm gonna rate this 5 stars. Lol. and a 10/10, just because this made me laugh, very much.

dude

dude you have the right idea. but man you need to study up on musical knowledge and theory. You have the right sounds and right instruments for a decent techno song but your doing so many off time beats that it makes the song sound like crap even though there is a steady drum beat behind it, you cant just off beat everything. The ending sounds alot better than the intro. because its actually synched with the drums some what but learn how to better arrange your songs instead of jush pusing random buttons and using random notes and for gods sake please pick one key signature and stick with it. and your jumping like 3octaves at a time at the end. that doesnt good. if you want any help on music knowledge then send me a pm and well talk. you got the spirit but not the right stuff yet

what the f man!

Where,, in the world, is the freaking STEADY beat>..????? u gave me nothing but crap yo. Plus it wasn't on the beat, and it wasnt' good at all anyway. God, im gonna vomit!!