so after reviewing the first one, i realized that you had redone it, so i'll review this and the next one. shorter though, so just thing of it as an edit of the last review. everything was better except your timing was still off, and the ending was again in my opinion shit (sorry). still really pretty though.
Sound like some gay ass runescape song.
A little boring...
However, this would be pretty good for a forest scene of an rpg, so good title lol.
In my opinion, its lacking countermelodies, and maybe a light drum beat.
Thanks..yeah wasnt able to do too much with this or add a drum beat because of the program i used
its was a clam mellow mood and i liked it ^_^ keep up the good work, sound like some thing i hear on Runescape.