this is my previous track with a few changes in the piano's piano-roll and the volume of the separate channels. i did have something to say last time but i couldn't tell the difference between the 'description' and the newly introduced 'commentary', which was that the description doesn't show up anymore and everything has to go in the commentary section. i've forgotten what i wanted to say, so what's the point anyways.
i've got no earphones currently; tuning tracks based on how they sound on my laptop's crappy speakers or on my crappy old headphones is (nearly) equivalent to suicide. will try to get better hardware.