Ok I basicly just put the ryth-guitar back in and tuned it a bit. I also added a little beat in the hip-hop part and move some other things around a bit.
Probably not to much better then its original but surely better then its sister song Rip.
Thanks for reviewing and pushing me to make better/more music.
Lordtac
It's alright.
I liked the launching sequence bits you had. It was a bit random, in my opinion, until 0:32. Then, it had a more hip-hoppy feel. Then the rock bits came in. But I guess it was a pretty good fusion of Hip-Hop and Rock. Points for originality. Cheers!
Wow thanks :D this is a song me and flapp1 did way back in the day.
Flapp1 and me do alot of musical stuff together. and he felt like adding in hip-hop.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
lordtac1 
