It's not that bad at all.
You just need to work on the repetitive beginning if anything.
Thats what sells the song to most people.
And after like, 40 seconds, it starts to get better.
It's a nice soft song, but you took way to long to get into it.
/\_/\ wisemansson /\_/\
Its ok i guess
I just think its a bit too quiet at the beginning
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