Nice, I really enjoy the tone
It must have been something i ate
Very good for a first try
Its very well done, better than some first works here. The only thing I managed to pick up is that your song does get a little repetitive. I do like the attempt at variety, but it could be done better. Thats all I have to say.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.