Basically
I like it, so there you go! I like the whole...thing of it....yeah
I always liked metroid games and especially this thrilling choir song so i decided to create my own version of the Norfair. you can hear in this song that it´s echo/space kind of music or something (don´t know a particular word for this heehe hmmm) i haven´t forgotten the guitar in this song neither so hope ya like it...there´s is this little (or big) problem that i noticed after i did this...i should fix this soon and you will hear it in the end of the song so be aware of it and sorry about it.
Basically
I like it, so there you go! I like the whole...thing of it....yeah
you got the main idea down
and it sounds like it is cybernetic so therefore you get my thumbs up yay!!
It's.....I don't really know.
It kind of reminds you of Metroid. It's got a good beat and melody going, but it's still lacking.........I know!!! Pick up the pace towards the center, and change the rhythm a little later. It's only a suggestion, so you don't have to let me interfere with your vision of the piece.
hmm i think i should try that thanks for comment
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.