Nice Track :D
Hey, I'm friends with one of your friends...Joobles
So, I'd like to begin with saying nice track, and I'd like to run through the things I liked about this song, and the things I didn't.
First, the things I liked;
I like the slide with the organ at the beginning. The basic tune is very nice, as is the more complex bass line. The instruments you used for this song fit really well. What are they exactly? Not much else really, its a pretty short song so there isn't a lot of points to make :P
Things I didn't like;
There seems to be a lot of clipping, due to the kicks over power. If you want the kick to be more predominant on a small system, bring the bass down and the volume up, if you'd rather have it mastered for a big system, then raise the bass as much as you can without clipping. In this song, i'd bring the bass down a bit. The only clipping problem you have is with bass, which in my experience is the easiest to fix. The worst is mid range clipping I have found. No wait...I lie, you have some mid range clipping with the lead instrument, but from the sound of it its only due to volume, so that can be easily fixed.
I also think you should put a FL DIST on the clap and snare with a big reverb. When using an FL DIST, you need to bring the instruments volume up, but bring the FX volume for the channel which is linked to it down, other wise its loud as hell.
The kick sample used is also pretty crap. You definitely need to get a better one.
Also, at the end of every 4 bars, or when you bring in an instrument or lose one, you don't have a crash. I'm not saying you NEED one, just they tend to add a lot to music when they are implemented.
Ok, I think that is all :D
Overall, a very nice sounding track, only a very few problems, but if you fixed these it would make the track A LOT better.
Well done :D