Don't be so harsh

"No offense"? Starting a complaint like yours with that sentence doesn't quite fit. You have to consider that it was just a first attempt. I'm not actually sure why my frined put it on here in the first place. Make your reviews a little more gentle next time, because frankly, pointing out that it's uninspired tripe really, REALLY, just doesn't help.

Note: I only attatched a star rating because I had to.

Not that bad for a First timer.

Its okay for your first time, the title doesn't fit in really with the song but thats okay, it still sounds awesome. Maybe abit more work on the ending in your next song.

Uninspired TRIPE.

No offense, but this was simply awul. The samples didnt even seem to flow together. It sounds like you just took every guitar sample you had lying around in yer "My Documents" folder and just flopped them together on some drum beats you got off an e Jay program. None of it went together, it sounded like a copy and paste job, the title of the track didnt even make sense.

This track offended my ears and you need to work much harder on yer songs to compete with the other artists in the audio portal. This is the audio equivalent of "B".