Awesome!, it's got a nice feel to it and I think would make a awesome background song for a game.
Very Metreiod Primish
It was very smooth. More Hip hopish than soothing though...It needed a faster build up mainly because it was sounding repetitive. Try not to repeatyour loops. It was Ok, but you need to go about a different way of making your songs. Try Listening to my song (::Rebirth Of Stars::) If you need any ideas. Good luck.