Allright, but could be built even better

Has some great potential in it!
I feel that u have some talent for dance music!
Bass is pretty nice, drums also, melody is pretty ok too..
Buttttt.. i think every aspect (drums, instruments, structure, variation, transitions,..) could get even better! this reminds me of my early songs: details arent pro (yet)
If u want some free, professional dancesamples, go to http://www.vipzone-samples.com thats where i got mine!
ur music will sound even better with these professional samples ;)
keep up the good work, tell me if u have a new song!

mind checking out some of my songs?