all in all not a bad concept but i agree with kamikazeboy here. you do need a better rhythm section for this, possibly a better, heavier "bass" line would help me "Chill Out".
still not too bad....
Very low fi, but lacking real substance.
It's very nice as a loop, but i would love to see this longer. Right now I feel like theres a good rhythm going with the melody, but a bit of low fi 8bit like drums would be cool like somewhere in the middle to climax it a bit. Or even a light soldier like snare track through the whole thing would make it more chillish. Right now its more like just floating around aimlessly..
i mean its just personal preference, I could see a lot of other uses for this loop just on its own, but yea, a nice drum and a bit more variation in the bass line would be good to add flava. Overall, its a very nice little loop in its lo fi approach =]
Thanks for the review, I'll see if I can take your advice and change it.