despite what the others said i belive the intro is
perfect it helps with the build up and helps you feel the music
It's pretty good song dude.
Try to make sure however, that your intro isn't too long. I couldn't be bothered to lsiten because there was nothing there, as Dangerousmelody stated, "You lose alot of people".
However, I skipped ahead, and the song seems pretty moving, which is awesome!
Pro's: Awesome lyrics and great guitar.
Con's: Work on the guitar mixed with the drums. They seemed to create alot of noise and drowned out the vocals. It's also too long, and the guitar solo didn't really seemed to have much feeling to it as it's the wrong kind of pacek, Slow it down.
Pretty good though!
4/5 - 7/10
wasn't bad. Needed a little work in the beginning, you lose a lot of people when you really don't here anything. I liked what lyrics I could hear over the music. But overall a very good song.
That's what it made me feel. And I assume that was the point, so well done ;)
Pros: Good guitar, good instrumental EQ.
Cons: Vocals need polishing. Back vocals came in late (personal preference). Vocals are soft and sitting behind the instruments.
5 and 9. ^_^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.