The piano in the intro sounds off key. The synths that come in in like 20 seconds in to it comes in straight, but it's a bit too loud. The drum line is fire. The synths that come in at 1:30 sound official as well. Keep working on this, I'm sure you'll be able to get it down perfect. ^.^
Wow, war-spawn actually reviewed my song! And I agree with almost everything you said. After hearing it again, the piano is a bit off key and the synths are kinda loud. But I didn't really think the drums were too interesting but I supposed they got the job done. I will someday take the time to fix these mistakes but for now, this is it. Thanks
This is a great song, it has the potential to be much better though. How you keep it coming all the way to the end, the synths, and the piano all make this far above the average hip hop song.
I didn't find those drum samples to interesting though
Wow, thanks for the great review. I know it can be better, but I'm kinda new to music production. Just wait until I get reason or something more advanced. But anyway, yeah, I know the drums aren't very interesting, but I focused more on melody and stuff rather than the drums which I made myself. I don't use the pre made beats that comes with the program.
It was alright
Well it was a pretty poor audio submission if you ask me. The piano messed everything up for me and whatever that is in the background annoyed me even more. I was hoping there'd be something special in the end but there wasn't. Overall it's one of the worst I've ever heard and it be a lie to tell you this was an average submission, I know you worked hard and all but if the submission isn't good it doesn't matter.
Wow. Harsh. That's all I really have I say. One of the worst? You could've at least giving me some constructive critisim. Oh well. Not everyone can like your music.
Pretty good song
that was pretty good
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the 7. Making tracks on Garage Band that don't totally blow is a challenge, but think I'm getting the hang of it. I already have a few tracks ready and done, but the quality is kinda bad. I'm working on it.
nice slow beat
I liked it a lot. Similar to slow beats in real songs. Makes nice use of the piano to keep the melody moving along. Nice rythym as well, nice job.
Thanks man. this means alot to me. I know my past beats have been kinda bad, but positive reviews like this keep me going. Thanks.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.