good start. good 00:45-01:12
everything else sounded hectic. that stuff you add at 00:13 doesn't fit with the first melody. i don't think it's even in the same key. the parts i mentioned that are good above are better than the rest of the song.
Whipped this up 2day after work. Its short but i hope you like it, you'll get the title :)
good start. good 00:45-01:12
everything else sounded hectic. that stuff you add at 00:13 doesn't fit with the first melody. i don't think it's even in the same key. the parts i mentioned that are good above are better than the rest of the song.
I must admit I agree with you, i tried to work with what i had.
Thanks for the review
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