yeah its not peices right
but theres a few things within it that sounds good. an placed right would sound pritty good, an also within the song it needs some transactions to keep it real an ongoing with a hint of wanting to hear more of it.
but this song is just a long peice of notes.
not a Song
work on the placment of things an you have somthing pritty good
Yeah, kinda. While I'll argue that it is a song (or actually a piece of music, since the actually definition of 'song' implies that there is singing in the piece), I don't really like the bridge or whatever it would be called in this case (maybe the 'b' section).
bring it together
This song only errs in being disjointed, if their was a more unifying melody the song would be completely awesome. Has a sort of post apocolytic/ ghost town potentail sound to it.
Thanks. I never really noticed the post apocolyptic/ghost town quality of the piece, but I can see it. I honestly have no idea what I was trying to do with this song. I started with the bassy thing that I had stuck in my head, and the rest of the song just kinda came out as I was recording.
not to bad.
Kinda crazy at some points but its pretty good for being what it is.. very original sounding.. So good work!
Thanks, crazy is good... I think. I like crazy, anyway.
I'm glad you like the song.
Thanks for the kind review.