Need to work on it a little bit more
The music was great and I didn't have any problems with it. Your voice on the other hand was overpowering and it took me away from the song. I also thought that your voice was a bit whiny. Also when you scramed "oh" during the middle of the soung the speakers popped a for a second. Other than that this was a solid song and I hope you tinker with it a bit more. Hope I helped and best of luck to you.