Hmmm....

The only thing I really want to dock you for is the choice of distortion on the guitar. I would have elected something a bit heavier, likely using your back pick-up with perhaps something with less reverb and a bit heavier bass and gain on the distortion. It sounds too...light?

The percussion also I wish had been a little more developed? But I'm a bit of a drum whore.

Eh..

Didn't really enjoy the gutair part myself. THe transition from intro to music should have been more plotted out and such.

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mmm...! i like it... i like the intro lol! pretty awsome, but i didnt quiet like the guitar, you could have done better by using diffrent guitar which actually gets in the music, so it doesnt really like of background noise...

still, keep it up anways!