Too simple could have been more complicated. Maybe to make hardcore trance

Nice

And a nice piece of work here I like how this starts off and takes on an even flow of things, you really push the limits there and make it sound very good, you bring lots of quality, so nice work here, And keep making stuff like this its pretty good stuff and want to hear more stuff like this its always a pleasure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as I found this to be brilliant on its own.

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excellent

Very relaxing, when I listen I imagine azure sky with fleecy clouds and mild wind slighty caressing magic aerial towers. Beautiful simple in rhythm song!

cool

keep up the good work

Great

Stars off soft and simple and progresses intensly throughout the entire track. I love the rythem, though it doesn't sound anything like a storm to me. Anyhow, keep up the great work!

-cd-