Very short so this was very short here you have a nice track here but this was a very short one I could see you adding onto this with some nice added sounds and mixtures you already have some nice sound on this one but overall this was pretty cool so nice effort.

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I could see you adding onto this with some nice added sounds and mixtures you already have some nice sound on this

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wtf...

I picture a girl or named Jaimy running away from a man stalker to this =(...picturing a guy running away is even funnier

Very chaotic.

This definitely sounds like you were bored. Its got some cool samples scattered in it... though there is absolutely no form to it.

If you actually do make music with substance and form... I would like to hear some.