what program you used fl studio ?
It's boring but entertaining (somehow).
I got bored...
I think it's better to leave these works for personal use, instead of submitting. It could maybe fit somekind of scene.
I don't know if you took this serious, if so, then try to work on your beat. The whole piece is quite out-of-sync right now. It's simple, I won't go and shit about that, everybody has his style, but I think you and I both know this isn't good.
Keep practicing, and submitting :)