Not bad...

it sounds like loads of tunes get mixed together so its annoying... no real main melody... you put too much in them so you cant really hear the "In the end" mellody.

Next time try to make the melody bit smoother so you hear much better, and the other thing is that the tunes are too well mixed together... so not good, especially that loud boom boom noise.

Well, try to improve next time, since yo've have made diffrent of In the end's remix...

Keep it up then, keep on experminting!

Dan.