OMG! I almost got a heart attack!

That, like, fucking came out of nowhere at max volume! The guitar was too fucking loud. The composition itself was fair (I would of given it a 7) but it suffered greatly due to overpowering distortion and volume and lack of clarity, thus taking away my enjoyment, from 7 to 1. Turn it down, make the melody clearer, add a keyboard, bass, and drumkit or whatever you want and the song will be, like, 10 times better. Keep trying! You have the potential to be a good musician, I can tell. I can help you out if you want.

I love it!

This is a good peice, sounds like you were just rippin' up that guitar bro.
Not a song particularly listened by much, but to the metal lovers it rules.

but you need to work on making the give a little lighter, i know it's heavy metal but have some drums, and that this would also need more of a higher solo. but all in all pretty good shit dude.