Dark Lament

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On my personal Opinion this is a better one. Feedback Issues Still. Review please.


OMG! I almost got a heart attack!

That, like, fucking came out of nowhere at max volume! The guitar was too fucking loud. The composition itself was fair (I would of given it a 7) but it suffered greatly due to overpowering distortion and volume and lack of clarity, thus taking away my enjoyment, from 7 to 1. Turn it down, make the melody clearer, add a keyboard, bass, and drumkit or whatever you want and the song will be, like, 10 times better. Keep trying! You have the potential to be a good musician, I can tell. I can help you out if you want.

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Thanks for the review, it'll really help, fortunately i have an electric piano... But i don't have a bass, and i have a shitty drum kit. I will turn it down and re-submit it since i know that'll help. Check back in a few days and it'll be working again!

I love it!

This is a good peice, sounds like you were just rippin' up that guitar bro.
Not a song particularly listened by much, but to the metal lovers it rules.

but you need to work on making the give a little lighter, i know it's heavy metal but have some drums, and that this would also need more of a higher solo. but all in all pretty good shit dude.

DJ-Ultimize responds:

I know what you mean with the whole drum thing. Unfortunately I don't have a dumset, and the electric drums i have don't work... Unless i put in some batteries, but i have no batteries right now... Unless i scavenge for some...

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Credits & Info


1.14 / 5.00

Nov 27, 2007
8:56 PM EST
Heavy Metal
File Info
3 MB
3 min 17 sec

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