COMMENT

No no no.. DO NOT listen to these guys, they don't have a clue man. This shit was perfect man, don't even need to improve it, aiight G? Peace.

Very slow song

It was good, don't get me wrong, but it just took forever to get itself going. If you jammed everything into itself, keeping it as is, just compress it all into a shorter time, while keeping all the music.
That will increase the speed of it, and make it more catchy.
Thats just what I would do.
If you meant for it to be a relaxing beat, then leave it.
Also, some of the beginning parts seem disconnected from each other.
Like you made each one seperately, and pushed them together.
Thats the one thing I see wrong.
Anyway, wow long review, hope some of it helped.

Nice one

This is the kind of awesome song style from Bomberman Hero! Good for some video game background song very simplistic but moving I give it a 4/5 or 8/10

Very VERY cool. =)

Ok, heres EXACTLY what I think of it... you needed to start that beat a little bit earlier. It was a little annoying and needed to start out faster. I am very glad you added new things at the right moment after that however. Each synth fit in very well together! If you listen closely... then the first tune that you put into the song, the duuuu duuu duuuu duu, is a little bit off from the actually song. You needed to take away that tune anyway by the time the song reached 2 minutes. You also needed to add some sort of heavy type piano or synth to make you want to dance. It is techno after all. Oh and make sure to not put to many layers of things together, because then it sounds very mashed up. I have the same taste in music that you do, but you need to bring out the way you create it better. Try listening to some of my music. You will probably get some ideas. Will, keep up the good work. I liked the overall beat.

Listen to my music!

FatKidWitAJetPak

HOLD EVERYTHING!!! When it hit 5:15 where that awesome drum beat came in... that was PERFECT. I enjoyed the way you added the flute afterwards along with the bubble noise. Great job on that part!!! it boosted it up from a 7 to an 8.