I just had to follow that review.
This sounds like when I mess around on the keyboard. Look, it's nice you made this yourself, but... It still sucks. Really, get some synchronization into your head, and this will be good. good luck.
I'm sorry.........but it's CRAP!!!!
The rhythm is good. You could probably use the "annoying" melody in the beginning, and then come in with a "real" melody and blasted everyone away with awsomeness. Please, don't use this instrument ever, EVER again. For inspiration, check out Paragonx9, nal 1200 (listen to Feral Sea), reone662, and dimrain47.
Wow, just wow
Honestly, it's like had a seizure trying to make this song.
Everything is just out of wack.
If you meant for this, then I'm sorry but stop trying to make music.
Can you keep a simple 4-beat going?
First of all, get a real melody set, so it doesn't just sound like random annoying sounds that are pulsing at...well...random times......Secondly, Add to it with other stuff then just a main beat and messed up melody... The melody, if it must be called that should keep in beat with what drives the music, not randomly switching beats, cuz it kinda sounds like it is skipping.