Good tune, if a little harsh
It's not too bad, it just sounds like your mix was too harsh. This tune wanted to go airbourne, if you know what I mean and the harshing is just pulling it down. If you lightened it a bit and maybe took down the bass a little, it would be a rather good song.
Thanks for reviewing\listening.. You're right about the harshness, i'm terrible at mixing and sometimes i just crank all the knobs up which rarely sounds Ok.
Just curious, are you Norwegian? Just asking cause of your Name on here..