This was nifty
OK so this was a nifty little piece it was rather interesting and had a fast-pace start, it was also kind of short though, so maybe by improving on ths you can make it longer, stretch it out while still keeping some of the fast sound style, some other mixed in sounds would be nice aswell, but anyways you do have something good here, i enjoyed your presentation here so nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More mix of sounds would be nice, stretching it out making longer would be a plus for this decent piece.