The beginning is very nice. Some parts of the song are following a nice pattern, then some go off with some good energy levels, which I think is a nice touch to the pattern.
The basses were very effective.
Basically, the only problem with this song was at 1:33 when the song silences for 15 seconds until the end. A silence is good, but not for 15 seconds.
Those basses did work out really nice in this. Lots of potential here :)
Thanks, it was a fun experiment that turned out sounding pretty cool.