Pretty good. It was pretty random and short. The organs are a nice touch. Ending was pretty random as you just hear a rattle.
The organ did set a good pattern in the song. Although, I think this isn't your best song.
read my user page it will explain why this isn't such a great song. It's real old =P made in 2005 back when I would use only one main part and one accumpniment. The shackers were because I had lost many endings of songs to bad uploading process from itunes.
Its would have been better if it was paced faster at
00:16 and had a strong bass beat to it.
I'm taking an "electronic music" class in school right now, and we use garage band. I've made a few songs with it, but none that I've posted. This is not that bad considering the crappiness of garage band.