I like the concept a lot, and you tracked real guitar in very, very well, especially with the pinch harmonic in there. Nice touch. This certainly is a Craol of the Bells season, and you demonstrated a lot of time toward this, I think you should have gone the whole way and gone for perfection on the palm muting sixteenth notes at the beginning. Otherwise, almost flawless - Roland church bells always good. Fuller bass might be good, FL doesn't always provide the best bass.
Check out my recent remix of the same at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/107757, drop me a review!
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