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I don't have a title for this one yet, but feel free to come with ideas in the comment section ! Also feedback would be appreciated! I don't aim for a win, I participated in this competition only for fun, I'm surprised I made it so far into the finals, thank you judges that listened carefully to everything and gave feedback too ! I wish everyone in the finals good luck and let's see who is the best one in NGUAC 2021 :D

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Super cool!

I think this should be named: Midnight Skies

I like the dreamy synths at the beginning, although the compression and reverb both seem a little too heavy. The build-up into :47 is cool, and the synth melodies there are really upbeat and catchy. Some of the synths here are a bit cheesy, including the lead, and the chord progression at 1:25 is pretty cliche. That said, I’m enjoying the strong beats and variations at 1:56. You start to overuse the transition with the rising percussion by the third time at 3:00, but I appreciated the variation on the main melody during the final refrain. The production quality, progression, mood, and melodies are all really solid here. The sound design isn’t my favorite, but my biggest problem is probably how generic the harmonic structure, arrangement, and compositional details are. Still, you’ve earned a lot of credit here for the rich, well-balanced textures and catchy melodies. Keep at it, Fumijena, and thanks for coming out to the NGUAC this year! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8.25/10

Fumijena responds:

thank you so much for the feedback ! thanks for the opportunity as well ! see you next year :D

History will remember this.

Song is pretty good, it has nice melody´s very creative work.
Intro would like the traditional house build up rather then that default vst sound.
Kick and progression is pretty soild. House music is very repetitive like trance but thats kinda part genre but when i listen to ur track i hear 4 different style of the melody and thats make song generic. Its like u had an idea but ur tryed to make song more complicated then it is.
Normal tips from me would say you should always follow a red line an structure of ur track, Intro > break > build up> main lead > break > build up > Main lead epic > outro if you understand what i mean. Anyway gl with contest /cheers

Fumijena responds:

thank you for your feedback! <3

I feel like it's a bit generic and repetitive, but great mixing and sound design, best of luck to you!!!

Fumijena responds:

thank you for your feedback! <3

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Fumijena
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Score
3.59 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 13, 2021
9:30 AM EDT
Genre
House
File Info
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8.6 MB
3 min 46 sec

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