hmm...
Pretty good, but as a musician for most of my life, and a pianist for many of those years, i have to stress one point. when you do a piece like this, always try to keep tempo. It's hard to, but find some way to keep the beat... i think there is a prog that's essentially a glorified metronome.
you are a helluva pianist, that much must be said...
However, 3.45 to 3.52 does scare me a bit, and 3,53 on doesn't appeal to me like the rest of the song.
Pretty good song... but i can't give the full 5 on this one. but have 9 stars for good try.